Is it bad that I was rooting for the ghosts the whole time? Great job.
Is it bad that I was rooting for the ghosts the whole time? Great job.
Who wouldn't root for the team Clyde is on x3
I really liked the animationand the concept of mixing pokemon go with fallout, but I was expectingmore concentration onthe fallout side than on pokemon. I think if the trainer had a fallout outfit and used his pipboy to select either a ball or raspberry it would help. Also the onixdid not seemlikeit was a fallout food depraved pokemon, but rather somthing normally found in pokemon go. Maybe for the next one you can have the trainer find a gym, but make it more apocalyptic. Regardless I love your animations, please keep it up.
Thanks very much for posting this feedback! It's very helpful to me! :)
I agree, I could have made it a lot more "Fallout"-y ^_^
Onix could have been mutated in various ways that would have strengthened the visual jokes for sure. There are a couple of reasons I didn't dress up the trainer to be more Fallout themed.
Firstly, I wanted him to be somewhat recognisable as a Pokemon trainer, but partly time constraints - I'd have loved to have drawn him wearing mismatched clothes and armor from the wastelands, but I only had a short slot in which to make this cartoon, and I ended up deciding to keep his design simple.
I'm not using this as an excuse, I personally agree that if the character design had been more like Fallout, the cartoon could have been stronger. I'm merely explaining why I didn't end up going down that pathway on this occasion. :)
As always, thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it!
I didn't like how they convinced Thiadora to let May go. Maybe some more action. Too much talking during the beginning too.Breasts on females look disproportioned.
Thank you for your comment. We would like to know where the breasts are dis-proportioned? So we can better ourselves for the future. From one artist to another, thank you.
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