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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Sweet animation. Goombort looked like Stewie Griffin, lol.

Pokémon Go Apocalypse?! Pokémon Go Apocalypse?!

Rated 4 / 5 stars

I really liked the animationand the concept of mixing pokemon go with fallout, but I was expectingmore concentration onthe fallout side than on pokemon. I think if the trainer had a fallout outfit and used his pipboy to select either a ball or raspberry it would help. Also the onixdid not seemlikeit was a fallout food depraved pokemon, but rather somthing normally found in pokemon go. Maybe for the next one you can have the trainer find a gym, but make it more apocalyptic. Regardless I love your animations, please keep it up.

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Crunchlins responds:

Thanks very much for posting this feedback! It's very helpful to me! :)

I agree, I could have made it a lot more "Fallout"-y ^_^

Onix could have been mutated in various ways that would have strengthened the visual jokes for sure. There are a couple of reasons I didn't dress up the trainer to be more Fallout themed.
Firstly, I wanted him to be somewhat recognisable as a Pokemon trainer, but partly time constraints - I'd have loved to have drawn him wearing mismatched clothes and armor from the wastelands, but I only had a short slot in which to make this cartoon, and I ended up deciding to keep his design simple.
I'm not using this as an excuse, I personally agree that if the character design had been more like Fallout, the cartoon could have been stronger. I'm merely explaining why I didn't end up going down that pathway on this occasion. :)

As always, thanks so much for the feedback, I really appreciate it!

How To Be An Animator How To Be An Animator

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Thanks for the advice! Now I'm ready to a real animator, hooray!

Champion 7 Chapter 2 Champion 7 Chapter 2

Rated 2 / 5 stars

I didn't like how they convinced Thiadora to let May go. Maybe some more action. Too much talking during the beginning too.Breasts on females look disproportioned.

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TerminatedAccount responds:

Thank you for your comment. We would like to know where the breasts are dis-proportioned? So we can better ourselves for the future. From one artist to another, thank you.

Rip Snorting Ep. 3 Rip Snorting Ep. 3

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Lol, white devil

Heroes And Demons Forest Assault Part 2 Heroes And Demons Forest Assault Part 2

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Very smooth movements, maybe get closer with the camera. Seemed a bit too long and started losing interest because the main stick guy wasn't going anywhere. A hero without a purpose has no meaning.

Fefnir - Pilot Fefnir - Pilot

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

The fighting wad too slow but a job well done so far. A bit of work on the movements would be helpful.

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